AsylumGuido

Good job. I liked that. Nice production, as well. I have my boys check it out, too.

SmashMouth

Nice lyrics ...

Is this a possible source for your inspiration?


Southpark is always controversial .

rezburna

Nah. South Park wasn't funny to me anymore by the time I hit 13.

The inspiration is my long and ongoing wait of making it into the music industry on a major scale as I watch people I've worked with, been friends with, or associated with reach the destination with less talent by being brown nosers and gimmicks. Feels like purgatory. Waiting on Heaven.

MaggieMayTB

Knowing the meaning behind your words and your motivation inspired me to listen a second time with an understanding which included compassion, anger and an eye on your future. Never give up on creating a feeling.....

I like it and in the morning my drivers will hear it.

rezburna

Thanks! A lot of times the meaning of hip hop songs can get lost in the harsh way it's presented. The slang, the profanity, the beat; it can run people away before they realize the message. I'm a metaphorical thinker, but I speak through colloquialisms a lot in my music because without it I over think my target audience.

"So deceitful like a chair with no more room to bare."

A play on words. "De (the) ceit (seat) ful (full).

"Call me Poseidon. I seize (seas)."

"The God of my crew, they blasphemy (blast for me.)"

The statement is literally blasphemy in the true since of the word, but I also meant they'd be willing to shoot and kill for me. A street phrase that represents that. Double entendre.

I'm rambling. Lol

"The first need of a free people is to define their own terms.” - Stokely Carmichael

saintfan

Okay. So, I'm not much on Rap music since the Fat Boys, but they used to call me the "Caucasian Soul Brotha" in high school, mostly I think because I was (and still am) a rabid and avid Herbie Hancock fan. LOL

I just never cared much for rap music. Just being honest.

Having said that, I echo Guido. It's a very good production. I don't care for rap music, but I'm all about art in all its forms, so I say more power to you and I hope you make it.

And it's a heck of a lot better than this video, which is a thing a used car salesman in Oakland told me about last time I was at the dealership. LOL

C'mon Man...